Lisa's Diary

2011-03-09 · 첨삭 강사 Connie

학생이 쓴 원문

I was very busy today. But two professor give me group work. Its dealline is next week. So I am worried this. I want to have a good teamwork with them. I expect your calling is impossible tomorrow. Because I will has fire drill in dormitory tomorrow.

강사 첨삭

I will be really sad tomorrow : ( I will miss you Lisa dear!! Take care and goodluck on your fire drill!! See you^^ I was very busy today. >> CORRECTBut two professor give me group work. >> Two of my professors gave us some group work.Its dealline is next week. So I am worried this. >> The deadline is next week so I am worried.I want to have a good teamwork with them. >> CORRECTI expect your calling is impossible tomorrow. Because I will has fire drill in dormitory tomorrow. >> I expect that our class will be cancelled because I will have a fire drill in our dormitory tomorrow. >>OR You might not be able to contact me because we will have a fire drill in our dormitory tomorrow.

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