Lisa's Diary
학생이 쓴 원문
I'm worried my brother.
Beacuse My brother is Janan.
Tsuname came to Japan.
I send a text message.
"Are you okay?"
But my brother didn't send a message.
I was very worry.
I knews he is safe befor 1 hours.
he don't use public transfortation and cell phone.
But It's a mercy.
I want he come to korea safely.
강사 첨삭
~ (>_<)Hi pretty Lisa!!! I'm so relieved to hear that your brother is safe where he is now.
Let's pray that he will be safe.
And I thank you so much for your participation for our classes this week. Good job!!
See you again on Monday~!
~ T. Christine
I'm worried my brother.
>> Correct!Beacuse My brother is Janan.>> Because he is in Japan now.
Tsuname came to Japan.>> There was a tsunami that hit Japan.
>> The country was hit by a tsunami.
I send a text message. "Are you okay?"
>> I sent him a text message asking him if he was okay.But my brother didn't send a message.>> But my brother didn’t reply.
I was very worry.>> I was very sorry.
I knews he is safe befor 1 hours.>> I only knew he was safe an hour ago.
he don't use public transfortation and cell phone.>> He can't use the public transportation and cellphone services.
But It's a mercy. >> But it's a pity.
OR >> I pity his situation.
I want he come to korea safely.
>> I wish he can come home safely to Korea.
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