Lisa's Diary

2011-03-12 · 첨삭 강사 Christine

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I'm worried my brother. Beacuse My brother is Janan. Tsuname came to Japan. I send a text message. "Are you okay?" But my brother didn't send a message. I was very worry. I knews he is safe befor 1 hours. he don't use public transfortation and cell phone. But It's a mercy. I want he come to korea safely.

강사 첨삭

 ~ (>_<)Hi pretty Lisa!!! I'm so relieved to hear that your brother is safe where he is now.  Let's pray that he will be safe.  And I thank you so much for your participation for our classes this week. Good job!! See you again on Monday~!  ~ T. Christine   I'm worried my brother. >> Correct!Beacuse My brother is Janan.>> Because he is in Japan now. Tsuname came to Japan.>> There was a tsunami that hit Japan. >> The country was hit by a tsunami. I send a text message. "Are you okay?" >> I sent him a text message asking him if he was okay.But my brother didn't send a message.>> But my brother didn’t reply. I was very worry.>> I was very sorry. I knews he is safe befor 1 hours.>> I only knew he was safe an hour ago. he don't use public transfortation and cell phone.>> He can't use the public transportation and cellphone services. But It's a mercy. >> But it's a pity. OR >> I pity his situation. I want he come to korea safely. >> I wish he can come home safely to Korea.  

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