Lisa's Diary

2011-03-15 · 첨삭 강사 Christine

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Today is a White Day. A man give candy to a girl on White Day. But I like more a chocolate. So my boyfriend give me chocolates. I have a sad story. My boyfriend will go business trip during 3 months. I'm very very sad. But I will waite him. Because I love him.

강사 첨삭

Hi there Lisa!!! Thanks for our wonderful class… hey, don’t say you’re not a good senior ^^ You study a lot and you make your homework always. ^^ Have more confidence in yourself okay?! Have a restful night~!  ~ Christine ~   Today is a White Day. >> Today is "White Day."  A man give candy to a girl on White Day. >> Men give candies to women on White Day.                                                                  But I like more a chocolate. >> But I like/prefer chocolates more.    So my boyfriend give me chocolates. >> So my boyfriend gave me chocolates. I have a sad story. >> Correct!  My boyfriend will go business trip during 3 months. >> My boyfriend will go on a business trip for 3 months. I'm very very sad. >> Correct!  But I will waite him. Because I love him. >> But I will wait for him, because I love him. 

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