Lisa's Diary
학생이 쓴 원문
Today is a White Day.
A man give candy to a girl on White Day.
But I like more a chocolate.
So my boyfriend give me chocolates.
I have a sad story.
My boyfriend will go business trip during 3 months.
I'm very very sad.
But I will waite him.
Because I love him.
강사 첨삭
Hi there Lisa!!!
Thanks for our wonderful class… hey, don’t say you’re not a good senior ^^ You study a lot and you make your homework always. ^^ Have more confidence in yourself okay?!
Have a restful night~!
~ Christine ~
Today is a White Day.
>> Today is "White Day."
A man give candy to a girl on White Day.
>> Men give candies to women on White Day. But I like more a chocolate.
>> But I like/prefer chocolates more. So my boyfriend give me chocolates.
>> So my boyfriend gave me chocolates. I have a sad story.
>> Correct!
My boyfriend will go business trip during 3 months.
>> My boyfriend will go on a business trip for 3 months. I'm very very sad.
>> Correct!
But I will waite him. Because I love him.
>> But I will wait for him, because I love him.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.