Lisa's Diary

2011-03-15 · 첨삭 강사 Christine

학생이 쓴 원문

I decide to think positive. My boyfriend will go business trip. But It is good thing. Because He can learn Chiness and a business. And I also can have many study hours. Maybe he will go to china again. In that time I hope to think positive. positive make that I am always with him.

강사 첨삭

Hello there pretty Lisa!!! Thanks again for doing your composition. ^^,  I’m sad to hear that your boyfriend will be going away… I know you will miss him a lot and I am proud of your determination to see the good side of things.  ~ I hope that you and our boyfriend will still have a strong relationship for a long time to come.   ~ Chris ~   I decide to think positive. >>  I decided to be a positive thinker. >> I decided to be optimistic.My boyfriend will go business trip. >> My boyfriend will be going on a business trip.But It is good thing. Because He can learn Chiness and a business. >> But it is a good thing, because he can learn Chiness and about business.And I also can have many study hours. >> Moreover, I can also study for a longer time.Maybe he will go to china again. >> Correct.In that time I hope to think positive. >> For the length of time that he will  not be here, I will try to think positively.positive make that I am always with him. >> By thinking this way, I will feel like I am always with him.  

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