Lisa's diary

2011-03-17 · 첨삭 강사 Connie

학생이 쓴 원문

I met my seniors and my friends who went to china with me. A senior has his job. This is very good. He bought meals for us. He is so nice guy. And I like our group. I hope that our group have a good semester.

강사 첨삭

Hi there Lisa!! Thanks for writing again!!! ^^, I hope you’re having a good Thursday evening! See you later in class!  ~ T. Christine I met my seniors and my friends who went to china with me. >> Correct! A senior has his job.>> One of my seniors has a job. This is very good.>> Correct! He bought meals for us.>> Correct! He is so nice guy.>> He is such a nice guy. And I like our group.>> Correct I hope that our group have a good semester. >> I hope that our group will be having a good semester.  -- Thanks! 

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