Lisa's diary
학생이 쓴 원문
I met my seniors and my friends who went to china with me.
A senior has his job.
This is very good.
He bought meals for us.
He is so nice guy.
And I like our group.
I hope that our group have a good semester.
강사 첨삭
Hi there Lisa!! Thanks for writing again!!! ^^,
I hope you’re having a good Thursday evening!
See you later in class!
~ T. Christine
I met my seniors and my friends who went to china with me.
>> Correct! A senior has his job.>> One of my seniors has a job.
This is very good.>> Correct!
He bought meals for us.>> Correct!
He is so nice guy.>> He is such a nice guy.
And I like our group.>> Correct
I hope that our group have a good semester.
>> I hope that our group will be having a good semester.
-- Thanks!
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