Lisa's Diary
학생이 쓴 원문
My weekend was poor.
The Toeic test was difficult.
I was very lonely because it is first weekend without my boyfriend.
But I did my homework and went shopping with mom.
So that's not too bad.
I thought more and more studying english and making me busy.
If I become more budy, I could feel much less lonely.
I hope to do my best and I hope he also does his best.
then, we will become a nice couple in the future.
But It is dufficult that adapt to the new surroundings.
강사 첨삭
Hi there pretty Lisa!
I really appreciate you writing your diary everyday! I’m glad because you shared your story to me. Goodluck for your future plans!
~ (>_<)~ T. Christine
My weekend was poor.
>> I think I didn't have a good weekend.
OR >> My weekend wasn't that great.The Toeic test was difficult.
>>The TOEIC test was difficult.I was very lonely because it is first weekend without my boyfriend.
>>I was very lonely because it was my first weekend without my boyfriend.
>>I was very lonely because it was the first weekend that I’m not with my boyfriend.But I did my homework and went shopping with mom.
>>But I did my homework and I went shopping with my mom.So that's not too bad.
>> Correct!I thought more and more studying english and making me busy.
>> I’m thinking about studying English more and making myself busy.If I become more budy, I could feel much less lonely.
>> If I am more busy, I could feel less lonely.I hope to do my best and I hope he also does his best.
>>I hope to do my best and I hope that he will also do his best.then, we will become a nice couple in the future.
>>Then, we will become a nice couple in the future.But It is dufficult that adapt to the new surroundings
>>But it is difficult to adapt to new surroundings.
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