Lisa's Diary

2011-03-28 · 첨삭 강사 Christine

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My weekend was poor. The Toeic test was difficult. I was very lonely because it is first weekend without my boyfriend. But I did my homework and went shopping with mom. So that's not too bad. I thought more and more studying english and making me busy. If I become more budy, I could feel much less lonely. I hope to do my best and I hope he also does his best. then, we will become a nice couple in the future. But It is dufficult that adapt to the new surroundings.

강사 첨삭

Hi there pretty Lisa! I really appreciate you writing your diary everyday! I’m glad because you shared your story to me. Goodluck for your future plans!   ~ (>_<)~ T. Christine My weekend was poor. >> I think I didn't have a good weekend.  OR >> My weekend wasn't that great.The Toeic test was difficult. >>The TOEIC test was difficult.I was very lonely because it is first weekend without my boyfriend. >>I was very lonely because it was my first weekend without my boyfriend. >>I was very lonely because it was the first weekend that I’m not with my boyfriend.But I did my homework and went shopping with mom. >>But I did my homework and I went shopping with my mom.So that's not too bad. >> Correct!I thought more and more studying english and making me busy. >> I’m thinking about studying English more and making myself busy.If I become more budy, I could feel much less lonely. >> If I am more busy, I could feel less lonely.I hope to do my best and I hope he also does his best. >>I hope to do my best and I hope that he will also do his best.then, we will become a nice couple in the future. >>Then, we will become a nice couple in the future.But It is dufficult that adapt to the new surroundings >>But it is difficult to adapt to new surroundings.  

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