Lisa's Diary
학생이 쓴 원문
Today is nothing special.
I just studied and talked my friends.
Maybe it is very boring.
But I like my pattern.
Because I do my best.
I subscribe a newspaper.
But a newspaper's delivery is too late.
A newspaper is usually deliverd from 5 A.M to 7 A.M.
But my newspaper is deliverd about 9 A.M
I hoped to read a newspaper in the morning
But I don't read that.
So I will call newspaper company.
강사 첨삭
Hi my dear! Don't feel like your day is boring or what you're doing is boring.Just make it to a point to enjoy every single moment of your day and don't forget to smile always.
Today is nothing special.>>Correct!>>Nothing special happened to me today.I just studied and talked my friends.>>I just studied and talked to my friends.Maybe it is very boring.>>Correct!
But I like my pattern.>>Correct!>>But I like my routine.Because I do my best.>>Correct!I subscribe a newspaper.>>I purchased a newspaper,But a newspaper's delivery is too late.>>but the delivery was too late.>>but the delivery was delayed.A newspaper is usually deliverd from 5 A.M to 7 A.M.>>The newspaper is usually delivered between 5a.m. to 7a.m,But my newspaper is deliverd about 9 A.M>>but my newspaper was delivered around 9a.m.I hoped to read a newspaper in the morning>>I was hoping to read the newspaper early this morning,But I don't read that.>>but I didn't read it.>>but I didn't have time to read it.So I will call newspaper company. >>Correct!Correction>>Correct!
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