Lisa's Diary
학생이 쓴 원문
I saw a calander.
Today is on March 30.
I met my boyfriend last March 30.
Today is one year since we met.
But my boyfriend is not next to me.
I'm little sad.
He tlod me "I'm sorry. I love you."
But I don't forgive him.
강사 첨삭
Hi there beautiful and wonderful Lisa~!
I feel for you, I think your boyfriend should be beside you now, however, as you have told me in the past, he is doing this for his future. I hope you can be more patient with him. ^^
Just try to do some of the things that always make you happy so you can at least get your mind off some of the things that upset you. Have a great Wednesday night. ^^
~ T. Christine ~(>_<)~
I saw a calander.
>> I saw a calendar.
OR >> I viewed my calendar.Today is on March 30.
>> Today is March 30.
OR >> Today is the 30th of March.I met my boyfriend last March 30.>> Correct.
Today is one year since we met.>> Correct.
OR>> It has already been a year since we met.
But my boyfriend is not next to me.>> Correct.
OR >> Sadly, my boyfriend is not with me.
I'm little sad.>> I'm a little sad.
He tlod me "I'm sorry. I love you.">> He told me, I'm sorry. I love you.
But I don't forgive him.
>> But I can't forgive him.
OR >> I won't forgive him.
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