Lisa's Diary

2011-03-31 · 첨삭 강사 Christine

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I saw a calander. Today is on March 30. I met my boyfriend last March 30. Today is one year since we met. But my boyfriend is not next to me. I'm little sad. He tlod me "I'm sorry. I love you." But I don't forgive him.

강사 첨삭

Hi there beautiful and wonderful Lisa~! I feel for you, I think your boyfriend should be beside you now, however, as you have told me in the past, he is doing this for his future. I hope you can be more patient with him. ^^ Just try to do some of the things that always make you happy so you can at least get your mind off some of the things that upset you. Have a great Wednesday night. ^^  ~ T. Christine ~(>_<)~   I saw a calander. >> I saw a calendar. OR >> I viewed my calendar.Today is on March 30. >> Today is March 30. OR >> Today is the 30th of March.I met my boyfriend last March 30.>> Correct. Today is one year since we met.>> Correct. OR>> It has already been a year since we met. But my boyfriend is not next to me.>> Correct. OR >> Sadly, my boyfriend is not with me. I'm little sad.>> I'm a little sad. He tlod me "I'm sorry. I love you.">> He told me, I'm sorry. I love you. But I don't forgive him. >> But I can't forgive him. OR >> I won't forgive him.  

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