Lisa's Diary
학생이 쓴 원문
Now is 10:30 P.M.
I'm very tired.
I want to sleep quickly.
But I miss time to postpone english class.
So I am waitting Christine.
Today I went to dental clinic becuse of brace.
It's not painful.
강사 첨삭
Hi there very pretty Lisa!! Your composition today was a bit short. ^^
I still thank you for answering my call and I hope you will have a restful sleep. ^^
See you tomorrow! Take care and stay pretty~!
~ Chris
Now is 10:30 P.M.
>> The time now is 10:30pm.
>> It is now 10:30 in the evening.I'm very tired.>> Correct
I want to sleep quickly.>> Correct
But I miss time to postpone english class.>> But I was not able to have enough time to postpone the class.
So I am waitting Christine.>> So, I am waiting for Christine's phone call.
Today I went to dental clinic becuse of brace.>> Today, I went to the dental clinic to have my braces adjusted.
It's not painful.
>> Correct
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