Lisa's Diary

2011-03-31 · 첨삭 강사 Christine

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Now is 10:30 P.M. I'm very tired. I want to sleep quickly. But I miss time to postpone english class. So I am waitting Christine. Today I went to dental clinic becuse of brace. It's not painful.

강사 첨삭

Hi there very pretty Lisa!! Your composition today was a bit short. ^^ I still thank you for answering my call and I hope you will have a restful sleep. ^^  See you tomorrow! Take care and stay pretty~! ~ Chris Now is 10:30 P.M. >> The time now is 10:30pm. >> It is now 10:30 in the evening.I'm very tired.>> Correct I want to sleep quickly.>> Correct But I miss time to postpone english class.>> But I was not able to have enough time to postpone the class. So I am waitting Christine.>> So, I am waiting for Christine's phone call. Today I went to dental clinic becuse of brace.>> Today, I went to the dental clinic to have my braces adjusted. It's not painful. >> Correct

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