Lisa's Diary

2011-04-04 · 첨삭 강사 Ella

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I think over my future nowadays. I want to have specialized job. So I thought a teacher. But I am also thinking a tax accountant. The exam for tax accountant is very difficert. But position is good. I have many dream. So I don't know what to do. I don't know what I do well. I want to chioce one. But I don't do that. So this semester I will study English. Because English is important regardless of a job. I am covetous for my future. So I study hard today. and I will study hard from now on. Christine asks me "what do you do today?". But my answer is very boring. "I studied English." XD

강사 첨삭

Gorgeous and stunning Lisa!!! ^____________^ I was so surprised today! Your composition is amazingly longer than before… ^^ , Great job!! Keep on writing okay!? You don’t have to write about what happened with your day. Try to write about something that happened in the news or describe a movie or book. ^^,  Thanks again and have a very awesome night!  ~ T. Christine~ I think over my future nowadays. >> Nowadays, I am thinking over my future.  I want to have specialized job.>> I want to have a specialized job. OR >> I want to specialize in a specific field. So I thought a teacher.>> So I thought of becoming a teacher. But I am also thinking a tax accountant.>> But I am also thinking about becoming a tax accountant accountant. The exam for tax accountant is very difficert. But position is good.>> The exam for tax accountants is very difficult but the position is good. I have many dream.>> I have many dreams. So I don't know what to do.>> Correct! I don't know what I do well.better >>  I don’t know where I excel the most. I want to chioce one.>> I want to choose only one. >> I want to make a choice. But I don't do that.>> But I can’t do that. So this semester I will study English. Because English is important regardless of a job.>> So this semester, I will be studying English because it is important regardless of the job you want to apply for. I am covetous for my future.>> I am determined to have a good future. So I study hard today. and I will study hard from now on.>> So from now on, I will be studying hard and I will start today. Christine asks me "what do you do today?". But my answer is very boring.>> If Christine asks me. “What did you do today?” I think my answers are boring. "I studied English." XD >> Correct! ~ Lisa ^^, Never say that you are boring, simply talking to a special person like you, who has many dreams, thrills me… it makes me happy. ^^, Keep on learning and I strongly believe you will be successful in whatever field you choose. ^^,

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