Lisa's Diary
학생이 쓴 원문
I think over my future nowadays.
I want to have specialized job.
So I thought a teacher.
But I am also thinking a tax accountant.
The exam for tax accountant is very difficert.
But position is good.
I have many dream.
So I don't know what to do.
I don't know what I do well.
I want to chioce one.
But I don't do that.
So this semester I will study English.
Because English is important regardless of a job.
I am covetous for my future.
So I study hard today.
and I will study hard from now on.
Christine asks me "what do you do today?".
But my answer is very boring.
"I studied English." XD
강사 첨삭
Gorgeous and stunning Lisa!!!
^____________^ I was so surprised today! Your composition is amazingly longer than before… ^^ , Great job!! Keep on writing okay!? You don’t have to write about what happened with your day. Try to write about something that happened in the news or describe a movie or book. ^^,
Thanks again and have a very awesome night!
~ T. Christine~
I think over my future nowadays.
>> Nowadays, I am thinking over my future. I want to have specialized job.>> I want to have a specialized job.
OR >> I want to specialize in a specific field.
So I thought a teacher.>> So I thought of becoming a teacher.
But I am also thinking a tax accountant.>> But I am also thinking about becoming a tax accountant accountant.
The exam for tax accountant is very difficert. But position is good.>> The exam for tax accountants is very difficult but the position is good.
I have many dream.>> I have many dreams.
So I don't know what to do.>> Correct!
I don't know what I do well.better >> I don’t know where I excel the most.
I want to chioce one.>> I want to choose only one.
>> I want to make a choice.
But I don't do that.>> But I can’t do that.
So this semester I will study English. Because English is important regardless of a job.>> So this semester, I will be studying English because it is important regardless of the job you want to apply for.
I am covetous for my future.>> I am determined to have a good future.
So I study hard today. and I will study hard from now on.>> So from now on, I will be studying hard and I will start today.
Christine asks me "what do you do today?". But my answer is very boring.>> If Christine asks me. “What did you do today?” I think my answers are boring.
"I studied English." XD
>> Correct!
~ Lisa ^^, Never say that you are boring, simply talking to a special person like you, who has many dreams, thrills me… it makes me happy. ^^, Keep on learning and I strongly believe you will be successful in whatever field you choose. ^^,
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