Lisa's Diary

2011-04-05 · 첨삭 강사 Whitney

학생이 쓴 원문

Today is tree planting day. So student union gave herb to students. I also took herb. Herb's smell is good. Tree planting day was public day in the past. Korean worked by saturday. But Korean works five days of a week. Accordingly, tree planting day is not public day. It was changed by goverment. So we must go work and go to school. When I was a children, I did't go to school this day. I'm very miss then.

강사 첨삭

Aloha gorgeous Lisa!!! ^^, Your sentences today were fantastic! Thanks again for telling me what happened to your day. ^^, I cooked kim bab over the weekend. ^^, It was so frustatingly hard. ^^, I hope you can tell me one of these days how to cook it successfully. Have a great night…  See you later!  ~ T. Chris ~   Today is tree planting day. >> Correct!So student union gave herb to students.>> So the student union gave herbs to the students. I also took herb.>> I was also given an herb. Herb's smell is good.>> The herb smelled good. >> It was fragrant. Tree planting day was public day in the past.>> The tree planting day used to be a public holiday in the past. Korean worked by saturday.>> Koreans worked on Saturdays. But Korean works five days of a week.>> But Koreans normally work five days in a week. Accordingly, tree planting day is not public day.>> Accordingly, tree planting day is not a holiday. It was changed by goverment.>> It was changed by the government. So we must go work and go to school.>> So we must go to work and go to school. When I was a children, I did't go to school this day.>> When I was a child, I didn’t go to school on this day. I'm very miss then. >> I miss those days.

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