Lisa's Diary
학생이 쓴 원문
Today is tree planting day.
So student union gave herb to students.
I also took herb.
Herb's smell is good.
Tree planting day was public day in the past.
Korean worked by saturday.
But Korean works five days of a week.
Accordingly, tree planting day is not public day.
It was changed by goverment.
So we must go work and go to school.
When I was a children, I did't go to school this day.
I'm very miss then.
강사 첨삭
Aloha gorgeous Lisa!!! ^^,
Your sentences today were fantastic! Thanks again for telling me what happened to your day. ^^,
I cooked kim bab over the weekend. ^^, It was so frustatingly hard. ^^, I hope you can tell me one of these days how to cook it successfully.
Have a great night…
See you later!
~ T. Chris ~
Today is tree planting day.
>> Correct!So student union gave herb to students.>> So the student union gave herbs to the students.
I also took herb.>> I was also given an herb.
Herb's smell is good.>> The herb smelled good.
>> It was fragrant.
Tree planting day was public day in the past.>> The tree planting day used to be a public holiday in the past.
Korean worked by saturday.>> Koreans worked on Saturdays.
But Korean works five days of a week.>> But Koreans normally work five days in a week.
Accordingly, tree planting day is not public day.>> Accordingly, tree planting day is not a holiday.
It was changed by goverment.>> It was changed by the government.
So we must go work and go to school.>> So we must go to work and go to school.
When I was a children, I did't go to school this day.>> When I was a child, I didn’t go to school on this day.
I'm very miss then.
>> I miss those days.
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