Lisa's Diary

2011-04-06 · 첨삭 강사 Christine

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It's a nice day. I like playing badminton. Today I played badminton with my friends. I am best in this group. my playing skill is equal a usual man. I like Wednesday and thursday. Because these days have just 2hours lesson. when being Wednesday and thursday, I have many free time. So I can play badminton, play with my friend, and study more. Although I didn't fulfill a studying plan, I have a happy day.

강사 첨삭

Young and pretty Lisa!!!! ^^, It’s good to hear you had a nice day. Thanks a lot for writing again, most of your sentences were correct! Great job!!  See you later! ~ T. Christine It's a nice day. >> Correct!I like playing badminton.>> Correct! Today I played badminton with my friends.>> Correct! I am best in this group. >> I was the best in the group.my playing skill is equal a usual man. >> I played like a man. I like Wednesday and thursday. Because these days have just 2hours lesson.>> I like Wednesdays and Thursdays because I only have classes for 2 hours.when being Wednesday and thursday, I have many free time. >> During these days, I have many free time.So I can play badminton, play with my friend, and study more.>> Correct! Although I didn't fulfill a studying plan, I have a happy day. >> Although I wasn’t able to fulfill my studying plans, I still had a happy day.

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