Lisa's Diary
학생이 쓴 원문
It's a nice day.
I like playing badminton.
Today I played badminton with my friends.
I am best in this group.
my playing skill is equal a usual man.
I like Wednesday and thursday.
Because these days have just 2hours lesson.
when being Wednesday and thursday, I have many free time.
So I can play badminton, play with my friend, and study more.
Although I didn't fulfill a studying plan, I have a happy day.
강사 첨삭
Young and pretty Lisa!!!! ^^,
It’s good to hear you had a nice day. Thanks a lot for writing again, most of your sentences were correct! Great job!! See you later!
~ T. Christine
It's a nice day.
>> Correct!I like playing badminton.>> Correct!
Today I played badminton with my friends.>> Correct!
I am best in this group.
>> I was the best in the group.my playing skill is equal a usual man.
>> I played like a man. I like Wednesday and thursday. Because these days have just 2hours lesson.>> I like Wednesdays and Thursdays because I only have classes for 2 hours.when being Wednesday and thursday, I have many free time.
>> During these days, I have many free time.So I can play badminton, play with my friend, and study more.>> Correct!
Although I didn't fulfill a studying plan, I have a happy day.
>> Although I wasn’t able to fulfill my studying plans, I still had a happy day.
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