Lisa's diary
학생이 쓴 원문
I'm very late my diary.
Today I have many class.
I studied in school for 7 hours.
And I came my home.
So I forgot my diary.
I maybe stop our class for 3 weeks.
I am so sorry.
Because of my mid-term.
강사 첨삭
Hi beautiful Lisa!!! I wish you all the luck in all your exams, I know that you are a diligent student. Keep it up! ^ ___________________ ^ I hope that we can still have the chance to talk more. I will miss you very much. OTL
Have a very great weekend and I’ll talk to you again okay. ^^
~ pretty T. Christine~
I'm very late my diary.
>> I am rushing my diary.
>> I made my diary at a very late time.Today I have many class.>> Today I had many classes.
I studied in school for 7 hours.>> Correct!
OR >> I had a total of 7 hours of classes in school.
And I came my home.>> Then I went home.
So I forgot my diary.>> Correct!
I maybe stop our class for 3 weeks.>> I might postpone our classes for 3 weeks.
I am so sorry. Because of my mid-term.
>> I am so sorry, it’s because of my mid-term exams.
It's OK... Have a great weekend!!
^________^
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