Lisa's diary

2011-04-08 · 첨삭 강사 Christine

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I'm very late my diary. Today I have many class. I studied in school for 7 hours. And I came my home. So I forgot my diary. I maybe stop our class for 3 weeks. I am so sorry. Because of my mid-term.

강사 첨삭

Hi beautiful Lisa!!! I wish you all the luck in all your exams, I know that you are a diligent student. Keep it up! ^ ___________________ ^ I hope that we can still have the chance to talk more. I will miss you very much. OTL Have a very great weekend and I’ll talk to you again okay. ^^ ~ pretty T. Christine~ I'm very late my diary. >> I am rushing my diary. >> I made my diary at a very late time.Today I have many class.>> Today I had many classes. I studied in school for 7 hours.>> Correct!  OR >> I had a total of 7 hours of classes in school. And I came my home.>> Then I went home. So I forgot my diary.>> Correct! I maybe stop our class for 3 weeks.>> I might postpone our classes for 3 weeks. I am so sorry. Because of my mid-term. >> I am so sorry, it’s because of my mid-term exams.      It's OK... Have a great weekend!!  ^________^

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