List as many reasons as you can that make students drop out of school.

2015-04-02 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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We can easily see many students drop out of school because of their misbehaviors and the other reasons. The reasons would be categorized as interior reasons and exterior reasons on the standards of where the reasons are mainly based on. First, students drop out of school because of their economical environments or family troubles. According to many renowned researches, students who are in a poor economical conditions tend to have a bad achievement in their schools. So they gradually get more disinterested in their study, then finally there would be much possibility that they drop out of school. Family troubles like their parents' divorce could be a main reason that students would be distracted from their study and then give up their study. In other aspects, students could choose alternative ways to learn something when they think they would get nothing from the formal education system. For example they could devote themselves to the professional jobs in very young age.

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You\'re back on the board [이름]! This proves that you really checked the feedback earlier. I ought to thank you for doing so. It\'s been a long time, right? I guess this is the kind of homework that makes you want to write. I better prepare more then. If not for the limit in the number of characters, you could have written a longer composition, along with your comments on our classes and many more. Nonetheless, you have written the primary reasons that make students drop out of school. But after a close look, we can also think of a lot of solutions. If you want us to discuss this a little further, just let me know. Oh wait, how about the story that you\'re supposed to share with me? Maybe later. I hope you won\'t forget about it. I still haven\'t gotten over the things that we just talked about. And by any chance, have you sent \"the file\" to our company email? I\'ll just wait for your signal. Thank you so much for this week [이름]. Regards to your family. Catch you later! _Klein We can easily see many students drop out of school because of their misbehaviors and the other reasons. >>Correct OR >> We can easily see many students drop out of school because of their misbehaviors and other reasons. The reasons would be categorized as interior reasons and exterior reasons on the standards of where the reasons are mainly based on. >>Correct OR >> The reasons would be categorized as interior and exterior reasons on the standards of where the reasons are mainly based on.First, students drop out of school because of their economical environments or family troubles. >>Correct OR >> First, students drop out of school because of their economic status and family background. According to many renowned researches, students who are in a poor economical conditions tend to have a bad achievement in their schools. >>According to many renowned researches, students who are in poor economic/economical conditions tend to have a bad achievement in their schools. So they gradually get more disinterested in their study, then finally there would be much possibility that they drop out of school. Family troubles like their parents\' divorce could be a main reason that students would be distracted from their study and then give up their study. In other aspects, students could choose alternative ways to learn something when they think they would get nothing from the formal education system. >>Correct For example they could devote themselves to the professional jobs in very young age. >>Correct OR >> For example, they could devote themselves to professional jobs at a very young age.

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