List three things you have to avoid for a while to save money if you set your heart on buying a bigg
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Hello [이름]. Thank you for sending this in. You know, as I grow older I also try to think more on saving. I\'ll try to do these things you mentioned. Thank you! Enjoy your day. See you in class.
-T. Beth
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I should save money because I want to buy a bigger house.
>>> CORRECT.
>>> OR: I should be saving money if I want to buy a bigger house.
So, I decided not to go shopping.
>>> CORRECT.
>>> OR: So, I decided to refrain myself from shopping.
When we go shopping, we can spend money for even unnecessary things.
>>> CORRECT.
I want to try to avoid unnecessary spending.
>>> CORRECT.
>>> OR: I want to try to avoid impulse shopping.
Next, I will avoid to watch showy advertisement.
>>> OR: In addition, I will avoid watching catchy advertisements.
It\'s tempting.
>>> CORRECT.
For the last, I\'ll avoid the desire to possess.
>>> OR: Last but not the least, I\'ll avoid the desire to possess (something).
Thank you!
>>> CORRECT.
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