List three things you have to avoid for a while to save money if you set your heart on buying a bigg

2018-08-07 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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I should save money because I want to buy a bigger house. So, I decided not to go shopping. When we go shopping, we can spend money for even unnecessary things. I want to try to avoid unnecessary spending. Next, I will avoid to watch showy advertisement.It's tempting. For the last, I'll avoid the desire to possess. Thank you!

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]. Thank you for sending this in. You know, as I grow older I also try to think more on saving. I\'ll try to do these things you mentioned. Thank you! Enjoy your day. See you in class.

-T. Beth

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I should save money because I want to buy a bigger house.

>>> CORRECT.

>>> OR: I should be saving money if I want to buy a bigger house. 

So, I decided not to go shopping.

>>> CORRECT.

>>> OR: So, I decided to refrain myself from shopping.  

When we go shopping, we can spend money for even unnecessary things.

>>> CORRECT. 

I want to try to avoid unnecessary spending.

>>>  CORRECT.

>>> OR:  I want to try to avoid impulse shopping. 

Next, I will avoid to watch showy advertisement.

>>>  OR: In addition, I will avoid watching catchy advertisements.

It\'s tempting.
>>> CORRECT. 

For the last, I\'ll avoid the desire to possess.
>>> OR: Last but not the least, I\'ll avoid the desire to possess (something). 

Thank you!

>>> CORRECT.   

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