Listening to music makes us comfortable.

2018-03-21 · 첨삭 강사 Anne

학생이 쓴 원문

Sometimes we meet hard time in life unexpectedly. When we are in trouble, we often think that why this happen to me. So people may blame someone or themselves. But it will not help to solve the problem at all. Stop thinking badly and listen to music. Then we will relax and we will be able to change the view. Music makes burdened person to heal, comfort.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!

Thank you so much for this!^^ Great work!

Relax and enjoy the rest of the day!

T. Anne^^


Sometimes we meet hard time in life unexpectedly.

>>Sometimes we experience hard times in our lives unexpectedly.

When we are in trouble, we often think that why this happen to me.

>>When we are in trouble, we often think of the reason why these things are happening to us.

So people may blame someone or themselves.

>>CORRECT!

But it will not help to solve the problem at all.

>>CORRECT!

Stop thinking badly and listen to music.

>>CORRECT!

Then we will relax and we will be able to change the view.

>>We can be relaxed and we\'ll be able to view the things the other way around.

Music makes burdened person to heal, comfort.

>>Music can heal and comfort a burdened person.

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