Listening to music makes us comfortable.
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Thank you so much for this!^^ Great work!
Relax and enjoy the rest of the day!
T. Anne^^
Sometimes we meet hard time in life unexpectedly.
>>Sometimes we experience hard times in our lives unexpectedly.
When we are in trouble, we often think that why this happen to me.
>>When we are in trouble, we often think of the reason why these things are happening to us.
So people may blame someone or themselves.
>>CORRECT!
But it will not help to solve the problem at all.
>>CORRECT!
Stop thinking badly and listen to music.
>>CORRECT!
Then we will relax and we will be able to change the view.
>>We can be relaxed and we\'ll be able to view the things the other way around.
Music makes burdened person to heal, comfort.
>>Music can heal and comfort a burdened person.
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