Little star

2019-04-03 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

학생이 쓴 원문

I like little star most. Because when I was young, I heard this song many times. This song is baby songs. I think the stars are shining. How about you?

강사 첨삭

Hi, Robert!


That\'s adorable. ^^

I like your answer very much!

Thank you for sharing this with me.

I like the song \"One step at a time\".

It is an American song, and it reminds me to take things one step at a time.

Because doing some things all at once can be quite stressful.

So sometimes it is better to do one thing at a time.

Everything will fall work out well eventually. ^^


~t. Ally



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I like little star most.

>> I like \"Little Star\" the most.


 Because when I was young, I heard this song many times.

>> CORRECT!


 This song is baby songs.

>> This is a baby song.


 I think the stars are shining. 

>> It reminds me that the stars are shining.


 How about you?

>> CORRECT!

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