Little star
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, Robert!
That\'s adorable. ^^
I like your answer very much!
Thank you for sharing this with me.
I like the song \"One step at a time\".
It is an American song, and it reminds me to take things one step at a time.
Because doing some things all at once can be quite stressful.
So sometimes it is better to do one thing at a time.
Everything will fall work out well eventually. ^^
~t. Ally
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I like little star most.
>> I like \"Little Star\" the most.
Because when I was young, I heard this song many times.
>> CORRECT!
This song is baby songs.
>> This is a baby song.
I think the stars are shining.
>> It reminds me that the stars are shining.
How about you?
>> CORRECT!
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