Live to the point of tears

A mother who has two kids had passed away last month. She separated with her lovely family in the end despite of 39 chemotherapy and 24 radiation therapy at the age of 36 after being diagnosed as terminal stage of colon cancer. She said in her blog,"So many days I want to live, but they would not allow me. I wish to see my kids growing, become grumpy with my husband, but they don't give me time. It was happiness that shouting at my kids to wake up and clean their teeth every morning. I tried to do everything to live not to mention the standard medical therapies, got acupuncture, and even ate a juice taste bitter. But it was wrong. I felt like a waste of precious time. After sort out my funeral in advance, I recognized that it was so happy to have a cuddle and kiss my babies every morning. Some times later, I will lose the joy of awake next to my husband and plaiting my doughter's hair. I was given 6 months to live, but live 22 months more as bonus. Continued next time.

Dear [Name]. [이름],   Your composition made me realize how important life is. I am also moved by this story. I suddenly remember the song \"I\'m Gonna Love you Through It.\"   Anyway, I really like this story. Thank you for sharing it to me! ^^   That\'s all for now! ^^ Happy reading! ^^, See you on Monday! ^^.   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~     A mother who has two kids had passed away last month. >> A mother who has two kids passed away last month. >> BETTER: A mother of two kids passed away last month. She separated with her lovely family in the end despite of 39 chemotherapy and 24 radiation therapy at the age of 36 after being diagnosed as terminal stage of colon cancer. >> I THINK IT IS BETTER TO SAY: She separated with her lovely family in the end despite of undergoing 39 sessions of chemotherapy and 24 sessions of radiation therapy at the age of 36 after being diagnosed of having terminal stage of colon cancer. She said in her blog,\"So many days I want to live, but they would not allow me. >> CORRECT! I wish to see my kids growing, become grumpy with my husband, but they don\'t give me time. >> I wish to see my kids growing and become grumpy with my husband, but they don\'t give me time. (It is better to use AND.) It was happiness that shouting at my kids to wake up and clean their teeth every morning. >> I THINK WHAT YOU WANT TO SAY IS: It was happiness to shout at my kids to wake them up and clean their teeth every morning. I tried to do everything to live not to mention the standard medical therapies, got acupuncture, and even ate a juice taste bitter. >> IT IS BETTER TO SAY: I tried to do everything to live not to mention the standard medical therapies, acupuncture sessions and even bitter taste juice. But it was wrong. >> But, it was wrong. (Put a COMMA after BUT.) I felt like a waste of precious time. >> I THINK WHAT YOU REALLY MEAN IS: I felt like those are just a waste of my precious time. After sort out my funeral in advance, I recognized that it was so happy to have a cuddle and kiss my babies every morning. >> After sorting out my funeral in advance, I recognized that it was so happy to cuddle and kiss my babies every morning. Some times later, I will lose the joy of awake next to my husband and plaiting my doughter\'s hair. >> Some times later, I will lose the joy of waking up next to my husband and plaiting my daughters\' hair. I was given 6 months to live, but live 22 months more as bonus. >> CORRECT! Continued next time. >> This will be continued next time.