Live with someone
학생이 쓴 원문
Living with someone is more better than alone.
Every people needs to conect with each other.
In my case, When I\'m alone, my emotions fluctuate a lot.
So I need someone helps sometimes.
Humans are animals that live together.
Maybe some person feeling more comfortable live with other but usually people they are more comfortable live with someone.
강사 첨삭
Hi Ann:)
Having company in our house really is very comforting. You can have another person that can help you in every step of the way. :)
Living with someone is more better than alone.
>> Living with someone is better than living alone.
Every people needs to conect with each other.
>> Every person needs to connect with other people.
In my case, When I\'m alone, my emotions fluctuate a lot.
>> In my case, when I\'m alone, my emotions fluctuate a lot so I need someone helps sometimes.
So I need someone helps sometimes.
>> CONNECT WITH THE SENTENCE ABOVE.
Humans are animals that live together.
>> Humans are creatures that live together.
Maybe some person feeling more comfortable live with other but usually people they are more comfortable live with someone.
>> Maybe there are other people that live more comfortably alone but there are some that are more comfortable in living with someone.
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