Living below the poverty line.
학생이 쓴 원문
I don\'t think living below the poverty line would be really happy. Because most of our society is made up of money, it seems inconvenient to think that we cannot get them and not enjoy them. It will probably be a tough life.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Sheila! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)
~ Teacher Tricia
I don\'t think living below the poverty line would be really happy.
>>> CORRECT!
Because most of our society is made up of money, it seems inconvenient to think that we cannot get them and not enjoy them.
>>> CORRECT!
It will probably be a tough life.
>>> CORRECT!
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