Living in cities vs rural areas
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It has a benefit that living in a city rather than a rural area.
There are lots of big hospitals and cultural places in a city, so people living in a rural area have a problem to use these facilities.
If a large company or public enterprise is located in a rural area, many people may live in this area, so we can reduce these problems.
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It has a benefit that living in a city rather than a rural area.
>>> Living in the city is more beneficial than living in a rural area.
There are lots of big hospitals and cultural places in a city, so people living in a rural area have a problem to use these facilities.
There are lots of big hospitals and cultural places in a city, so people living in a rural area have a problem to use these facilities.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
OR>>> There are lots of big hospitals and cultural places in a city, so people living in a rural area have a problem [with] facilities.
If a large company or public enterprise is located in a rural area, many people may live in this area, so we can reduce these problems.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
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