Living in Norway
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Living in Norway would be quite challenging in my life.
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This is my second time living in other countries, so I\'m well aware of what I should prepare before I go there and what kind of situation I would be facing in other countries.
>>This is my second time living in another country, so I\'m well aware of what I should do first before going there and to know the different situations I would be facing there.
Language barrier is one of the most critical matter when I go abroad. Unfortunately, Norwegian speak their own mother tongue, even though they could speak English fluently, there would be limit to express all I want to describe.
>>Language barrier is one of the most critical matter when I go abroad. Unfortunately, Norwegians speak their own mother tongue, even though they could speak English fluently, there would be limits on how I express all the things I want to describe.
I have experienced a numerous sort of foods worldwide through my travelling around the world, so foods won\'t be serious matter to me during my staying in Norway.
>>I have experienced trying numerous sort of foods worldwide through my travels around the world, so food won\'t be a serious matter to me during my stay in Norway.
Having said that, I\'m going to bring some Korean foods when I depart. I\'m worry little about my health.
>>Having said that, I\'m going to bring some Korean food when I depart. I\'m a bit worried about my health.
Currently I\'m very healthy, but my condition could be changed depending on surrounding.
>>Currently I\'m very healthy, but my condition could changed depending on the surroundings.
There\'s nobody who can take care of me in Norway, So, I\'ll have to take care of myself every moment not to be sent to a hospital which charges patients tremendous amount of money.
>> There\'s nobody there that can take care of me, So, I\'ll have to take care of myself every moment. Hospitals there charge patients with tremendous amount of money.
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