Living room
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For any gatherings, our living room plays a key role. That\'s why I check it first when I buy or rent a house. When our houses were built in 2014, I asked the constructer to arrange cozy and comfortable living rooms in every house regardless of the size of each house. I decided to rent our current house easily because it had a large and bright living room with nice view. In my living room, I put a big table for over 6 people. Our family and friends enjoyed chatting at the table.
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Happy Friday, Gi [이름]!
I couldn’t agree more! You are right, the living room plays an important role, especially when it comes to having guests and entertaining them. I also love cozy living rooms because they are usually the first space visitors see, and it’s where they tend to spend most of their time.
- T. Caitlyn
For any gatherings, our living room plays a key role.
>> CORRECT
That\'s why I check it first when I buy or rent a house.
>> CORRECT
When our houses were built in 2014, I asked the constructer to arrange cozy and comfortable living rooms in every house regardless of the size of each house.
>> When our houses were built in 2014, I asked the constructor to design cozy and comfortable living rooms in every house, regardless of their size.
I decided to rent our current house easily because it had a large and bright living room with nice view.
>> I decided to rent our current house right away because it had a large, bright living room with a nice view.
In my living room, I put a big table for over 6 people.
>> In my living room, I put a big table that seats over six people.
Our family and friends enjoyed chatting at the table.
>> CORRECT
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