Living together before getting married.
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These days, it is common for couples to live together before deciding to get married. Do you agree with their way of finding out things about each other?
Basically, I don’t agree with this. It is not too late to live together after getting married. Maybe there are many reasons why they decide to live together. They could be saving the house renter fee or knowing each other well or even having sex easily. But these things are just a little things compared with some demerits.
Especially, in Korea, it is true that most people think it negatively because they are thought unfaithful or unchaste people. Expressly, the women are not free from this kind of thought. Of course it would be prejudice. In reality, Many couple who don't get married yet are living together and having sex, surely the latter case is much more, but I think our society doesn't seem to receive this situation. We are in this society and at least we need to care about this reality. Second problem is a baby. Even though it is not to just these kind of couple, they have more chances than others. This is not to need to say. So details would be skipped. Last, I think the reason that Knowing each other well doesn’t make sense. It sounds like an excuse. There are many ways to know each other except for living together. Also, it is important to have a little distance to each partner. Sometimes it can hold them more tightly. All things that a person has are not good. It is unnecessary to show all things to others. Maybe it can make their relationship bad.
These things are the reasons why I don’t agree with living together before getting married.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Ms. [이름]!
Thank you for your composition today! You made your contentions clear in this essay. I can say that you firmly disagree with the thought. Well, the situation is the same in the Philippines. Our society doesn\'t readily accept this and people consider it as a sin. However, there are still some couples out there who live together secretly without the sacrament of marriage. Maybe they have good reasons, and whatever their reasons are, I just hope that things will work out fine with them that will lead to their marriage. In contrast, some do it for convenience, adventure, experience, etc. The bad thing is, whether their intentions of getting into this kind of situation are good or bad, women are always in the negative side. For men, they have nothing to lose.
T. JanE ^^
These days, it is common for couples to live together before deciding to get married. Do you agree with their way of finding out things about each other?>> Correct Basically, I don’t agree with this.
>> Correct
It is not too late to live together after getting married.
>> Correct
Maybe there are many reasons why they decide to live together.
>> Correct
They could be saving the house renter fee or knowing each other well or even having sex easily.
>> They could save house rental fee, or know each other well, or they could have sex easily.
But these things are just a little things compared with some demerits. >> But these are just little things compared with bigger demerits.
Especially, in Korea, it is true that most people think it negatively because they are thought unfaithful or unchaste people.
>> Especially in Korea, it is true that most people think about them negatively because they are thought to be as unfaithful or unchaste people.
Expressly, the women are not free from this kind of thought.
>> Expressly, women are not free from this kind of thought.
Of course it would be prejudice.
>> Of course it would be a prejudice.
In reality, Many couple who don\'t get married yet are living together and having sex, surely the latter case is much more, but I think our society doesn\'t seem to receive this situation.
>> In reality, many unmarried couples live together or have premarital sex. Surely, the latter is a more serious case, but I think our society doesn\'t accept this situation.
We are in this society and at least we need to care about this reality.
>> Correct
Second problem is a baby.
>> The second problem is the possibility of having a baby.
Even though it is not to just these kind of couple, they have more chances than others.
>> Unmarried couples who live together are more likely to have this problem than others.
This is not to need to say.
>> I don\'t need to elaborate on this.
So details would be skipped.
>> Correct
Last, I think the reason that Knowing each other well doesn’t make sense.
>> Last, I think the reason of knowing each other well doesn\'t make sense.
It sounds like an excuse.
>> Correct
There are many ways to know each other except for living together.
>> There are many ways to know each other aside from living together.
Also, it is important to have a little distance to each partner.
>> Also, it is important for couples to have a little distance from each other.
Sometimes it can hold them more tightly.
>> Correct
All things that a person has are not good.
>> Not all things a person has are good.
It is unnecessary to show all things to others.
>> Correct
Maybe it can make their relationship bad.>> Correct
These things are the reasons why I don’t agree with living together before getting married.
>> These are the reasons why I don\'t agree with the thought of living together before getting married.
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