ln England
학생이 쓴 원문
l want to live in England.
Because l like playing soccer and watshing exciting soccer game.
So l want to live in England, Europe to play soccer!!!
강사 첨삭
Hi there baby good evening!
I am so impressed with what you have shared about your homework..
If I were given a chance as well, I would rather live in that country...Because I want to meet you there..:)
I can\'t wait to talk to you again tomorrow baby..
Take care and have a good night...
xoxoTeacher Cam^^
l want to live in England.
>>correct
Because l like playing soccer and watshing exciting soccer game.
>>Because I like playing soccer and watching exciting soccer game.
So l want to live in England, Europe to play soccer!!!
>>correct
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