loneliness
학생이 쓴 원문
When we need usually something we choose to rent or buy.
Then what is the mean to rental partners ?
If we can buy partners instead of rental, how do this world become?
Is this the world that human makes happy?
I wonder that rental parnters solve their loneliness.
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Aki~
When we need usually something we choose to rent or buy.
>>> CORRECT!
OR >> People are opted to use their resources when they need something.
Then what is the mean to rental partners?
>>> Then how about those availing the rental partners?
If we can buy partners instead of rental, how do this world become?
>>> If we can buy partners instead of rentals, how would the world change?
Is this the world that human makes happy?
>>> Is this the world that makes humans happy?
I wonder that rental parnters solve their loneliness.
>>> I wonder if those rental partners solve their loneliness.
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