Loneliness
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1. What do you do when you are lonely?
When I feel lonely, I do something that I can concentrate on or move my body busily. And sometimes I eat sweets like cake and chocholate. But basically, I\'m not a person who feels lonely easily.
2. Do you think animals also get sad and lonely? If yes, why do you think so?
I think that animals also get sad and lonely. When the sister dog left, the remaining dog was so sad that it would lose hair.
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Thank you Ms. [Name]!
~Lucy
When I feel lonely, I do something that I can concentrate on or move my body busily.
>>CORRECT!
And sometimes I eat sweets like cake and chocholate.
>> And sometimes I eat sweets like cake and chocolate.
But basically, I\'m not a person who feels lonely easily.
>>CORRECT!
I think that animals also get sad and lonely.
>>CORRECT!
When the sister dog left, the remaining dog was so sad that it would lose its hair.
>>CORRECT!
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