Long Holiday
학생이 쓴 원문
I will have a break for 5days.It will be nice.Tommorrow I will go to baseball stadium.On Thursday,I will watch movie.On Friday,I will go to Incheon with my friends.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
You have a good plan for the holiday.
Just enjoy and make the most out of it.
I hope to see you on Thursday!
Have a great day ahead!
_Teacher Dianne ^^
I will have a break for 5days.
>> I will have a break for 5 days. (need a space after 5)
It will be nice.
>> correct
Tommorrow I will go to baseball stadium.
>> I will go to the baseball stadium tomorrow.
On Thursday,I will watch movie.
>> I will watch a movie on Thursday.
On Friday, I will go to Incheon with my friends.
>> correct
>> Or: I will go to Incheon with my friends on Friday.
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