Long holiday

Hi, [이름]!

I\'m sorry that you had a bad experience eating in a food court.

Maybe, you just need to pick a good restaurant next time.

I hope that on your next Thanksgiving day, it will be fun and memorable. ^^

Have a good night! See you on Thursday!

_Teacher Dianne ^_^

On Thanksgiving holiday I went to grandparents house.

>> I went to my grandparents\' house on Thanksgiving day.

It was too boring except get a pocket money.

>> It was too boring except when I got pocket money.

I ate Korean traditional jeon,traditional noodles and a lot of gimchi.I went to my cousins house and played game for 5hours and ate chicken.

>> I ate Korean traditional foods like jeon, noodles, and a lot of gimchi. I also went to my cousins house and played a game for 5 hours then I ate chicken.

I went to my mother side grandparents house and eat a lot of delicious food and chicken soup.

>> I went to my mother\'s side grandparents \'house and ate a lot of delicious food and chicken soup.

I went to movie theater with my friend and after that we went to buffet.And it was terrible.

>> I went to a movie theater with my friend then after that we went to a buffet and it was terrible.

Sabusabu\'s meat was really small and side manu was really bad. A lot of oil in meat and sweet noodles small foodcourt were make me feel stinky.

>> Shabu shabu\'s meat was really small and the side menu was really bad. The meat was oily and the noodles is sweet. The small food court made me feel stinky.