Long holiday or sleepy days?

Hello Debby :) Yup! The end of this week is today, Tursday! But it will not be only happy days since the exam come close to me. How would I celebrate Memorial day? I just spend doing things that I have to. I know I should hang national flag on, but I don't have. Especially Memorial day is important because I will be a soldier. Unfortunately, I can't do anything for that but observe a few minutes' silence for thier sacrifice. I'm not good at speaking yet as you can feel. I need to meet foreingers to improve my skills more or another way. It's not easy though. It is so much hard to make me fluently in English. By the way, I have a good news. I passed the test of officer with my friend. I got a message after we finished today's class. As I passed the test, I hope I get good scores in other classes. I'm really pleasant! XD I wish You also get a good news. Take care :) p.s Please consider third paragraph as a essay homework. I don' have enough space for it. :'(

Hi [이름]^^   How was your weekend? Mine was good and yes my good news was I watched two movies during the weekend. Hahahahaha.. Not as great as your news and yes.. CONGRATULATIONS!!!!^^ You did a good job and you passed!^^ I know you feel good about it so you must celebrate^^   Take care^^   T.Debby^^   Here are my corrections for you: Hello Debby :) >> Hi Debby^^ Yup! The end of this week is today, Tursday! >> Yup! The end of this week is today, Thursday!But it will not be only happy days since the exam come close to me. >> But it will not be just happy days since the exam comes closer to me.How would I celebrate Memorial day? >> CORRECT OR> How do I commemorate Memorial Day?  I just spend doing things that I have to. >> CORRECT OR> I just do the normal things that I do. I know I should hang national flag on, but I don\'t have. >> CORRECT OR> I know I should put up a National flag but I do not have one.  Especially Memorial day is important because I will be a soldier. >> CORRECT OR> Memorial Day is special because I will become a soldier. Unfortunately, I can\'t do anything for that but observe a few minutes\' silence for thier sacrifice. >> Unfortunately, I can\'t do anything for that but I observe a few minutes of silence for their sacrifice.I\'m not good at speaking yet as you can feel. >> CORRECT OR> I\'m not best at speaking yet as you know. I need to meet foreingers to improve my skills more or another way. >> I need to meet foreigners to improve my skills more or find another way.  It\'s not easy though. >> CORRECT OR> It\'s just not easy.  It is so much hard to make me fluently in English. >> It\'s very hard to make me fluent in English. By the way, I have a good news. >> CORRECT OR> I have great news to tell you. I passed the test of officer with my friend. >> I passed the test of being an officer with my friend. I got a message after we finished today\'s class. >> CORRECT OR> I got the news after our class today. As I passed the test, I hope I get good scores in other classes. >> CORRECT OR> I hope I also got good scores from my other classes.  I\'m really pleasant! XD >> CORRECT OR> I\'m really happy.I wish You also get a good news. >> CORRECT Or> I hope that you also get good news.Take care :) >> CORRECTOR> Be careful.^^ p.s Please consider third paragraph as a essay homework. >> CORRECT OR> Please refer the third paragraph as my answer.  I don\' have enough spacefor it. :\'( >> CORRECT OR> I don\'t have much space for it.