Long lasting relationship with my husband
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Yesterday was my 36th wedding anniversary. We had lunch with two daughters and had a together. Actually every anniversary we travel, but this time we didn\'t. But I am not disappointed. For a long time we have had a good relationship, so we don\'t mind of celebrating our anniversary. I think that the important thing is not celebrating special occasions but keeping a good usual relationship. Of course we have had ups and downs. But we have tried to talk with each other and understand each other.
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Hi, Gi [이름]!
Congratulations again on your 36th wedding anniversary! It\'s really nice to hear these kinds of stories from you. Continue enjoying each other\'s company, and here\'s to many more anniversaries for you and your husband.
- T. Caitlyn
Yesterday was my 36th wedding anniversary.
>> CORRECT
We had lunch with two daughters and had a together.
>> We had lunch with our two daughters and spent time together.
Actually, every anniversary we travel, but this time we didn\'t.
>> CORRECT
But I am not disappointed.
>> CORRECT
For a long time we have had a good relationship, so we don\'t mind of celebrating our anniversary.
>> We have had a good relationship for a long time, so we don\'t mind celebrating our anniversary too much.
I think that the important thing is not celebrating special occasions but keeping a good usual relationship.
>> I believe the important thing is not just celebrating special occasions but maintaining a consistently good relationship.
Of course, we have had ups and downs.
>> CORRECT
But we have tried to talk with each other and understand each other.
>> CORRECT
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