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2020-04-17 · 첨삭 강사 James

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Hand sanitizers are made of ethanol that shows antibacterial effects. Aloe vera is added to prevent roughness of the skin due to alcohol. Do not use disinfectants for eyes, spheres, mucous membranes, and skin with scars. Especially, you should wash it several times with clean water immediately when it gets into your eyes. Most hand sanitizers on the market contain 62% to 63% ethanol.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름],
Thank you!:) You\'re right!
Here are my corrections:
Hand sanitizers are made of ethanol that shows antibacterial effects.
>>> Hand Sanitizers are made of ethanol that shows antibacterial effects.
Aloe vera is added to prevent roughness of the skin due to alcohol.
>>>Aloe Vera is added to prevent roughness of the skin due to alcohol.
Do not use disinfectants for eyes, spheres, mucous membranes, and skin with scars.
>>> CORRECT
Especially, you should wash it several times with clean water immediately when it gets into your eyes.
>>> CORRECT
Most hand sanitizers on the market contain 62% to 63% ethanol.
>>> Most of hand Sanitizers on the market contain 62% to 63% ethanol.

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