Long tim no see teacher~!

2017-03-27 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Long tim no see teacher~! I missed you so much Did you had a great weekend? I had a great weekend but i will tell you my camp story first I woke up at 6 am in the morning I was really tired But i was really excited about the camp On that day i wore flower dress Flower dress is kind of popular this days First we went to the beach It was really beautiful We walk through the bridge I was kind of nervous What if the bridge break..... But it was okay KKK Next we went to watch opera it was great Then we also made ceramics It was easy Next we went to our lodging I ate delicious dinner there Then i played with my friend But next day it was rain outside so our Schedule was canceled I was so sad:( But i had a great camp:) Talk more on the class:)

강사 첨삭

Thank you so much baby!
I really missed you!

It was soooooo fun talking with you! I missed your laughter and your lovely face. But it\'s nice to hear that you had a great weekend.

You really enjoyed the camp...

I cant wait to hear your voice again.

Take care and have a good night!

xoxoTeacher Cam^^ 

Long tim no see teacher~!

>>correct
 I missed you so much

>>correct
 Did you had a great weekend?

>>Did you have a great weekend?
 I had a great weekend but i will tell you my camp story first

>>correct
 I woke up at 6 am in the morning

>>correct
 I was really tired

>>correct
 But i was really excited about the camp

>>correct
 On that day i wore flower dress

>>correct
 Flower dress is kind of popular this days

>>correct
 First we went to the beach

>>correct
 It was really beautiful

>>correct
 We walk through the bridge

>>We walked through the bridge.
 I was kind of nervous

>>correct
 What if the bridge break.....

>>correct
 But it was okay KKK

>>correct
 Next we went to watch opera it was great

>>We also went to watch an opera and it was great!
 Then we also made ceramics 

>>correct
 It was easy

>>correct
 Next we went to our lodging

>>correct
 I ate delicious dinner there

>>correct
 Then i played with my friend

>>correct
 But next day it was rain outside so our Schedule was canceled

>>But the next day it rained so we canceled our plan.
 I was so sad:(

>>correct
 But i had a great camp:)

>>correct
 Talk more on the class:)

>>correct

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