Long tim no see teacher~!
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Thank you so much baby!
I really missed you!
It was soooooo fun talking with you! I missed your laughter and your lovely face. But it\'s nice to hear that you had a great weekend.
You really enjoyed the camp...
I cant wait to hear your voice again.
Take care and have a good night!
xoxoTeacher Cam^^
Long tim no see teacher~!
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I missed you so much
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Did you had a great weekend?
>>Did you have a great weekend?
I had a great weekend but i will tell you my camp story first
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I woke up at 6 am in the morning
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I was really tired
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But i was really excited about the camp
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On that day i wore flower dress
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Flower dress is kind of popular this days
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First we went to the beach
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It was really beautiful
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We walk through the bridge
>>We walked through the bridge.
I was kind of nervous
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What if the bridge break.....
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But it was okay KKK
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Next we went to watch opera it was great
>>We also went to watch an opera and it was great!
Then we also made ceramics
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It was easy
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Next we went to our lodging
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I ate delicious dinner there
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Then i played with my friend
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But next day it was rain outside so our Schedule was canceled
>>But the next day it rained so we canceled our plan.
I was so sad:(
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But i had a great camp:)
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Talk more on the class:)
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