Long time no see

2020-07-01 · 첨삭 강사 Tricia

학생이 쓴 원문

Dear [Name], I am gald to meet you again. I am going to have a dinner with my customer. So I changed my lesson time and I pointed you for today lesson. When I have a calling from you, maybe I will be some place in Seoul. I think you heard this place \"Hongik University Station\" before from another Korean. Frankly, this is first time after graduating my university. Let\'s talk about this issue. See you soon.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]! :)

Thank you for your effort to write a composition.
Have a wonderful day. :)

- Tricia

I am gald to meet you again.
>> I am glad to meet you again.

I am going to have a dinner with my customer.
>> I am going to have dinner with my customer.

So I changed my lesson time and I pointed you for today lesson.
>> So I changed my class time and chose you as my teacher for today.

When I have a calling from you, maybe I will be some place in Seoul.
>> When I was having the class with you, I was in someplace in Seoul.

I think you heard this place \"Hongik University Station\" before from another Korean.
>> I think you have heard about the place \"Hongik University Station\" before from your other students.

Frankly, this is first time after graduating my university.
>> Frankly, this is my first time again to visit this place after graduating from my university.

Let\'s talk about this issue. See you soon.
>> Let\'s talk about this again next time. See you soon.

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