Long time no see !

My cousins who live in Seoul took a vacation and came to Busan. Since due to mutual life we were too busy to meet, we couldn't meet. But we were very pleased to see each other a long separation. We went to Hae-Un-Dae which is known for beautiful beach in korea with another cousins who live in Busan and married and their spouse. At Hae-Un-Dae we went to famous restraunt and had a great dinner. After having a dinner, we went to cousin's home and drank bottled beers. Because we must go to the office tomorrow, we broke up our party.

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My cousins who live in Seoul took a vacation and came to Busan.

>> My cousins who lived in Seoul took a vacation to Busan.
Since due to mutual life we were too busy to meet, we couldn't meet.

>> Due to our busy lives,  it was difficult to see each other.
But we were very pleased to see each other a long separation.

>> We were so pleased to see each other after a long time.
We went to Hae-Un-Dae which is known for beautiful beach in korea with another cousins who live in Busan and married and their spouse.
>> We together with my family and relatives went to Hae-Un-Dae which is known for the beautiful beach in Korea.

At Hae-Un-Dae we went to famous restraunt and had a great dinner.

>> While we were there we went to famous restaurants and had a great dinner.
After having a dinner, we went to cousin's home and drank bottled beers.

>> After dinner, we had a drink in my cousin's house
Because we must go to the office tomorrow, we broke up our party.

>> We call it a day earlier because we still have a work the following day.