Long time no see...^^

2013-01-24 · 첨삭 강사 Leny

학생이 쓴 원문

Though It is heard strange, I think It can be enough to occur in Korea. In Korea mass media, especially TV, Many people(almost young girls) express their favor through boy's wealth. Men are evaluated by wealth more than by truthful heart or faithfulness. In that culture, audiences is brainwashed as that's not strange and it's well to think like that. (audiences who don't think critical and take all of that messages) And I see my univ. friends, especially falling in love first. They are taken by their girlfriends. Even though they know it's uncomfortable, they didn't say any sorry things to their princess and give almost all things she want. So I'm so sad to listen that story. And I have 2 questions to me. I wonder that I also become like that if I fall in love? Is that love true love?

강사 첨삭

Hi Steve! Yes, long time no see. I don\'t believe in love at first sight. There\'s no such thing as love at first sight because two lovers should know each other for a longer time. If you will have a girlfriend in the future, it will be natural for you to adore her but be careful, if she will not love you because you can\'t give her all the things that she wants, then better think twice, thrice, or maybe hundreds.^_^ True love means, you know it already. I bet you\'re learning it in the church. =) Thanks for this homework. I\'ll call you again tomorrow. - Teacher Leny Though It is heard strange, I think It can be enough to occur in Korea. >>> Though it is strange to hear, I think this kind of story can really occur in Korea.In Korea mass media, especially TV, many people(almost young girls) express their favor through boy\'s wealth. >>> In Korea\'s mass media, especially TV, many people (all of whom are almost young girls) express their favors to the boy\'s wealth. Men are evaluated by wealth more than by truthful heart or faithfulness. >>> Correct. In that culture, audiences is brainwashed as that\'s not strange and it\'s well to think like that. >>> In this type of culture, audiences are brainwashed as that such are not strange and that it\'s good to think like that.  (audiences who don\'t think critical and take all of that messages)>>> Correct.And I see my univ. friends, especially falling in love first. >>> And I see my univ. friends falling in love at first sight. They are taken by their girlfriends. >>> Correct. Even though they know it\'s uncomfortable, they don\'t say no or sorry to their princesses that they can\'t buy anything for them. Instead, they give almost all things their girlfriends wanted.>>> Correct.So I\'m so sad to listen that story. >>> So I feel so sad to listen to that story. And I have 2 questions to me. >>> Correct >>> This made me ask myself two questions. I wonder that I also become like that if I fall in love? >>> I\'m wondering if I will become like that if I fall in love? Is that true love? >>> Correct.

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