Long time no see

2010-12-08 · 첨삭 강사 Ivyy

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Hello Ivyy, again. After resting, I feel that my English is needed more exercise as you said. Today, I talked with foreign collegues. It was short talk. But I could not express that I want to explain. But I was not shamed. I am satisfied with only this. So, I have to study hardly. And take care of your health. Your voice was really another person`s.

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Hi Kim Se Il! Thank you so much for your concern. I will always try my best to help you with your English skills. Always apply confidence in speaking with someone. And also apply what you have learned in class. Have a great day! ^_^           -Ivy   Hello Ivyy, again. >> Hello again, Ivy!After resting, I feel that my English is needed more exercise as you said. >> After a long rest, I have to agree with you that I need to refresh my English skills. Today, I talked with foreign collegues. >> Today, I spoke with my foreign colleagues. It was short talk. >> It was just a short talk.But I could not express that I want to explain. >> But I couldn’t express myself well.But I was not shamed. >> But I am not ashamed.  I am satisfied with only this. >> I am satisfied with my skills.So, I have to study hardly. >> Though I have to study more.And take care of your health. >>Take care of yourself.Your voice was really another person`s. >> You sounded different.

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