Long time no see
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello Ivyy, again.
After resting, I feel that my English is needed more exercise as you said. Today, I talked with foreign collegues. It was short talk.
But I could not express that I want to explain.
But I was not shamed. I am satisfied with only this.
So, I have to study hardly.
And take care of your health.
Your voice was really another person`s.
강사 첨삭
Hi Kim Se Il!
Thank you so much for your concern. I will always try my best to help you with your English skills. Always apply confidence in speaking with someone. And also apply what you have learned in class. Have a great day! ^_^
-Ivy
Hello Ivyy, again.
>> Hello again, Ivy!After resting, I feel that my English is needed more exercise as you said.
>> After a long rest, I have to agree with you that I need to refresh my English skills.
Today, I talked with foreign collegues.
>> Today, I spoke with my foreign colleagues.
It was short talk.
>> It was just a short talk.But I could not express that I want to explain.
>> But I couldn’t express myself well.But I was not shamed.
>> But I am not ashamed.
I am satisfied with only this.
>> I am satisfied with my skills.So, I have to study hardly.
>> Though I have to study more.And take care of your health.
>>Take care of yourself.Your voice was really another person`s.
>> You sounded different.
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