Long time no see~!

2010-12-15 · 첨삭 강사 RJ

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi, I'm Joey. Long time no see~! I did powerenglish with you but after about a month, the time you can teach didn't match my time. So, I did with another teacher. However, in my opinion and also my mom's opinion was your teaching skills, pronunciation and other things you did for me was better than the new teacher I had for a while. So, I quit and waited for the time that your time and my time can be matched. AND today!! My time finally matched your time. I'm glad to see you again. Nice to study again with you teacher RJ. I missed you sometimes, but I can meet you again!! It's about 5 months that I waited for your time to be matched. Anyways, Let's have a good time in our telephone conversation!!

강사 첨삭

Hello Joey!

Oh, silly me. No wonder your voice sounded so familiar to me. I'm sorry I wasn't able to recognize your voice right away. It’s nice to hear from you too! I am glad that you came back to my class! Anyway, I am sure that we will have good times together again so see you in class!

Hi, I'm Joey. Long time no see~!

>> Hi, it’s me Joey!

I did powerenglish with you but after about a month,

>>I was your student for one month.

 the time you can teach didn't match my time. So, I did with another teacher.

>>Unfortunately, after that month, our schedule didn’t match, so I was passed on to a different teacher.

However, in my opinion and also my mom's opinion was your teaching skills, pronunciation and other things you did for me was better than the new teacher I had for a while. So, I quit and waited for the time that your time and my time can be matched.

>> However, my mom and I prefer your teaching style as compared to the teacher I had for a while, and so I quit and waited for an available schedule under your class.

>>*remove “pronunciation and other things you did for me was better than the new teacher”*

AND today!! My time finally matched your time. I'm glad to see you again.

>> At last! Our schedule matched!

Nice to study again with you teacher RJ.

>> Nice to study with you again teacher Rj!

 I missed you sometimes, but I can meet you again!!

>> I missed you!

>> remove “but I can meet you again!!”

It's about 5 months that I waited for your time to be matched.

>>I’ve waited for you for five months!
Anyways, Let's have a good time in our telephone conversation!!

>> Anyway, I hope to have a great time talking with you!!

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