long time no see ;-)

2014-04-21 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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Finally I'm back! The operation was sucessful and every thing is perfect. Ofcourse It was really painful for 3 days, but after those days I'm getting better and better. Anyway from now on, let me tell you something crazyLOL. I met a guy here. He is really kind and nice to me. It has already been 6 days since I crushed on him. he's really attentive, considerate and friendly. I'm thinking of him awake or a sleep. Even whenever doctor comes round to see me, only that guy always comes into my eyes first. I can't take my eyes off him LOL. I had not fallen in love at a HOSPITAL like this before. ;p

강사 첨삭

Hi there my dear [이름]!   I\'m so happy to hear that you are recovering fast. I hope that you will fully recover after few weeks. You\'ve been in a critical situation and I\'m proud of you because you were able to overcome the pain. Anyway, I\'m also happy to hear that there is one person at the hospital who\'s making your heart thump rapidly. I hope that everything will go just fine. Anyway, I\'d like to hear more about that person in the near future.   Have a blessed Monday!   See you tomorrow!   ~Teacher Shanee   Finally I\'m back! >>Finally, I\'m back! The operation was sucessful and every thing is perfect. >>Correct! Ofcourse It was really painful for 3 days, but after those days I\'m getting better and better. >>Of course, it was very painful for three days but after those days, I\'m getting better and better. Anyway from now on, let me tell you something crazyLOL. >>Correct! I met a guy here. >>Correct! He is really kind and nice to me. >>Correct! It has already been 6 days since I crushed on him. >>It has already been six days since I started to have a crush on him. he\'s really attentive, considerate and friendly. >>He\'s really attentive, considerate, and friendly. I\'m thinking of him awake or a sleep. >>I\'m thinking of him while I am awake or asleep. Even whenever doctor comes round to see me, only that guy always comes into my eyes first. >>Whenever doctors are having their rounds, only that guy always comes into my sight first. >>Or: Whenever the doctors come to see me, only that guy always catches my attention. I can\'t take my eyes off him LOL. >>Correct! I had not fallen in love at a HOSPITAL like this before. ;p >>Correct!

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