long time no see!
학생이 쓴 원문
Long time no see!
I did a great job in my concert. But I feel sudden depression to all things what I tried to, that is the reason why I woke up at 10:00a.m. these days. I do not want to wake up late, but I feel so tired and I want to wake up late........I am so tired for all things. I think I lose my whole motivations
강사 첨삭
Congratulations, Stella!
I knew it! You really are a great dancer! Can you teach me some of your moves?
I\'m just kidding around! I think you will have a hard time teaching me since I\'m a bit too old for that.
But if it will motivate you to get back on your feet again, why not?
Oh Stella, please pull yourself together. That kind of feeling is unhealthy.
Why not go out with your friends and have fun? It may help you regain your strength.
Share your troubles with someone that you really trust, like your mother, and I\'m sure you are going to get the best advice for your recovery.
You can do it, Stella!
I will continue to cheer you on.
Best regards,
_Klein
Long time no see!>>Correct!I did a great job in my concert.
>>Correct!
But I feel sudden depression to all things what I tried to, that is the reason why I woke up at 10:00a.m. these days.
>>But I feel sudden depression for all the things that I tried to do that is the reason that I wake up at 10:00 a.m. these days.
I do not want to wake up late, but I feel so tired and I want to wake up late........
>>Correct
I am so tired for all things.
>>I am so tired of all things.
I think I lose my whole motivations
>>I think I have lost all my motivations.
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