Long time no see in my composition!!

2011-05-19 · 첨삭 강사 Ella

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We haven't seen in my composition for a long time. Sorry :( But I'm happy to be able to hear every weekday :D I'm hearing my co-worker's English conversation with a foreign applicant on the phone. I don't know what position he or she applies for. My co-worker just announced the result of their document judging and to check the e-mail which she sent. My co-worker spoke so fluently and her pronunciation was good. I envy her.... Even though I'm getting my post, I haven't done so far. This school might give me money without working.

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Hello [이름]! Long time no write! Haha! I am always happy to talk with you too every weekdays. J I'm sorry that I didn't check your message earlier. I guess your co-worker serves are your challenge to speak like her if not better. I hope to have a job like you have, doing nothing but earning money. Kk^^ Take care! -Tiny^0^   We haven't seen in my composition for a long time. Sorry :( >> We haven't talked in my composition for a long time. Sorry :( But I'm happy to be able to hear every weekday :D >> But I'm happy to be able to hear you every weekdays. :D I'm hearing my co-worker's English conversation with a foreign applicant on the phone. >>correctI don't know what position he or she applies for. >>correct >> I don't know what position he or she is applying for. (better) My co-worker just announced the result of their document judging and to checkthe e-mail which she sent. >>correctMy co-worker spoke so fluently and her pronunciation was good. >>correct ^^  I envy her.... >>correct >>I envy her?(In written English just use 3 dots (? This is called ellipsis. ^0^)Even though I'm getting my post, I haven't done so far. >> Even though I'm getting my post, I haven't done anything so far. This school might give me money without working. >>correct

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