Long time no see in my composition!!
학생이 쓴 원문
We haven't seen in my composition for a long time. Sorry :(
But I'm happy to be able to hear every weekday :D
I'm hearing my co-worker's English conversation with a foreign applicant on the phone.
I don't know what position he or she applies for.
My co-worker just announced the result of their document judging and to check
the e-mail which she sent.
My co-worker spoke so fluently and her pronunciation was good. I envy her....
Even though I'm getting my post, I haven't done so far.
This school might give me money without working.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Long time no write! Haha!
I am always happy to talk with you too every weekdays. J
I'm sorry that I didn't check your message earlier.
I guess your co-worker serves are your challenge to speak like her if not better.
I hope to have a job like you have, doing nothing but earning money. Kk^^
Take care!
-Tiny^0^
We haven't seen in my composition for a long time. Sorry :(
>> We haven't talked in my composition for a long time. Sorry :(
But I'm happy to be able to hear every weekday :D
>> But I'm happy to be able to hear you every weekdays. :D
I'm hearing my co-worker's English conversation with a foreign applicant on the phone.
>>correctI don't know what position he or she applies for.
>>correct
>> I don't know what position he or she is applying for. (better)
My co-worker just announced the result of their document judging and to checkthe e-mail which she sent.
>>correctMy co-worker spoke so fluently and her pronunciation was good.
>>correct ^^
I envy her....
>>correct
>>I envy her?(In written English just use 3 dots (? This is called ellipsis. ^0^)Even though I'm getting my post, I haven't done so far.
>> Even though I'm getting my post, I haven't done anything so far.
This school might give me money without working.
>>correct
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