Long time no see teacher
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Ooooohhh! I missed you even more baby!
Thank you so much for writing this composition...
Hmmm, I am so glad that you had a great time baby...
Cant wait to hear your story later.
Take care and have a great day!
I love you baby...
xoxoTeacher Cam^^
Long time no see teacher~!
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I missed you so much:(
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I went camping in the school
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It was really fun and excited
>>It was really fun and exciting.
First day was kind of soso..
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Because the teacher was kind of scared at first time
>>Because the teacher was kind of scary at that time.
But next day i noticed that they are not scary teacher
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They were just pretended scary
>>They were just pretending to be scary.
Because student don\'t listen to the teacher when teacher are not scary
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So, i was really surprised
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I really liked this camp
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It made me very healthy:)
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I will tell you more in the class
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i love you teacher
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see you in the class
>>See you in class!
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