Long time no see teacher

2017-06-05 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Long time no see teacher~! I missed you so much:( I went camping in the school It was really fun and excited First day was kind of soso.. Because the teacher was kind of scared at first time But next day i noticed that they are not scary teacher They were just pretended scary Because student don't listen to the teacher when teacher are not scary So, i was really suprised I really liked this camp It made me very healthy:) I will tell you more in the class i love you teacher see you in the class

강사 첨삭

Ooooohhh! I missed you even more baby!
Thank you so much for writing this composition...

Hmmm, I am so glad that you had a great time baby...

Cant wait to hear your story later.

Take care and have a great day!

I love you baby...

xoxoTeacher Cam^^ 

Long time no see teacher~!

>>correct
 I missed you so much:(

>>correct
 I went camping in the school

>>correct
 It was really fun and excited

>>It was really fun and exciting.
 First day was kind of soso..

>>correct
 Because the teacher was kind of scared at first time

>>Because the teacher was kind of scary at that time.
 But next day i noticed that they are not scary teacher

>>correct
 They were just pretended scary 

>>They were just pretending to be scary.
 Because student don\'t listen to the teacher when teacher are not scary

>>correct
 So, i was really surprised

>>correct
 I really liked this camp

>>correct
 It made me very healthy:) 

>>correct
 I will tell you more in the class

>>correct
 i love you teacher

>>correct
 see you in the class

>>See you in class!

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