Long time no see Tina!

2013-01-14 · 첨삭 강사 Tina

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Long Time no see Tina! I'm so happy to return to our class again. I learned so many things during my tour and I was impressed by beautiful cultures and buildings. One of the most important expierence that I have is my country is not overwhelmed from Europe. When I arrived London first I felt small, because a lot of people is taller than me and handsome even women. They have so many more fancy buildings and cultures than mt country. But the more I travel, the more I could feel that our country is as good as the Europe. We have great public traffic system, have so many free Wi-Fi zones, and have more safe public security. Finishing the tour, I can have a pride of Korean. I could realize how important English for my success. So I made my mind that I would be crazy about English when I would come back to Korea. Anyway nice to meet you againg!! Have a nice Sunday and see you Monday. Here is my homework. 1. What 2. Which 3. Which 4. What 5. Which 6. Which 7. What 8. Which 9. What 10. t

강사 첨삭

Hello there!

Wow! It seems that you really had a fun time during your trip to Europe. I hope that you keep with you what you have learned and experience there. It is indeed important to be able to communicate in English when you are in another country. Keep that strong motivation with you to help you improve your skills more. ^^

--- Teacher Tina :) ---

 Long Time no see Tina!

>> Correct.

I\'m so happy to return to our class again.

>>Correct.

I learned so many things during my tour and I was impressed by beautiful cultures and buildings.

>>Correct.

One of the most important expierence that I have is my country is not overwhelmed from Europe.

>>One of the most important experience that I had was that my country is not overwhelmed by Europe.

When I arrived London first I felt small, because a lot of people is taller than me and handsome even women.

>>When I first arrived in London, I felt small because a lot of people are taller than me and are handsome even their women are beautiful.

They have so many more fancy buildings and cultures than mt country.

>>They have many fancier buildings and cultures than my country.

But the more I travel, the more I could feel that our country is as good as the Europe.

>>Correct.

We have great public traffic system, have so many free Wi-Fi zones, and have more safe public security.

>>Correct. 

Finishing the tour, I can have a pride of Korean.

>>Finishing the tour, I feel proud being a Korean. 

I could realize how important English for my success.

>>I could realize how important English is for my success. 

So I made my mind that I would be crazy about English when I would come back to Korea.

>>Correct.

Anyway nice to meet you againg!!

>>Correct. (Spelling Check: again.)

Have a nice Sunday and see you Monday.

>>Correct.
Here is my homework.
1. What

>>Correct.
2. Which
>>Correct.

3. Which

>>Correct.
4. What

>>Correct.
5. Which

>>Correct.
6. Which

>>Correct.
7. What

>>Correct.
8. Which

>>Correct.
9. What

>>Correct.
10. t

>> Answer: What

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