Long time no write~^^; Hi!

Dear [이름],

Good evening and a happy Monday! ^.^

You are really correct with your point.

We are not only looking for real stories.

We also read for imagination.

Through creative writing, we gain more things.

We can have wider imagination.

We can also be creative and resourceful.

Anyway, all in all, you did well on your composition.

However, you committed some mistakes.

Therefore, please see the corrections and suggestions below.

See you on Monday! ^^

Happy weekend! ^^,

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

I disagree with this statement.

>> CORRECT!

In my case, I really like to read autobiography, self-help books.

>> In my case, I really like to read autobiographies and self-help books. (Use con[이름]ctions.)

>> OR: In my case, I really like reading autobiographies and self-inspiring books.

It can be helpful when I made my specific future and values.

>> It can be helpful when I make my specific future and values.

But the novels make my imagination rich.

>> However, novels make my imagination rich.

>> OR: It can be helpful when I make my specific future and values, but novels make my imagination rich.

>> OR: It can be helpful when I make my specific future and values, but novels widen my imagination.

The creativity made by novels is a great property.

>> CORRECT!

Information bulit by plenty of novels makes my works uniqe, and it will help me to amaze other people when I\'m in school or company.

>> Information built by plenty of novels make my works unique, and it will help me to amaze other people when I\'m school or company. (Be careful with the spelling of BUILT. INFORMATION is an uncountable noun, and it is singular, so MAKES should be MAKE.)