Long time no writing ! Sorry :) hahaha

2014-05-30 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

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I have to say again that your daily topics are so philosophical that sometimes I don't know how to write. Hahaha :) !!! But I think I could write today's one because my opinion comes to my mind when I see the topic. I don't think temporary or imperfect solutions to problems only create more serious problems. It is true that it may not solve the problem completely. But I think it still could help. It's like a diet.(These days(No,always) I really should do diet but I don't. So I come up with a diet as similarity. Hahaha T^T) We always lose 1-2kg time to time to accomplish our final goal which is to lose more than 10kg. Losing some pounds time to time helps to be what I want to be. Reducing 1-2kg isn't my final goal but it still helps me to get healthier and prettier. Do you also think that my opinion makes sense? I hope you so. Haha :) Have a great great great day, Rose :) !!!

강사 첨삭

Whoa! I  miss seeing your masterpiece, [이름]^^ Please enjoy camping with your family^^ I think you are just relishing your not-so-busy schedule nowadays so go ahead! Have a great Friday and thanks for making me smile every day! I have to say again that your daily topics are so philosophical that sometimes I don\'t know how to write. Hahaha :) !!! >>CORRECT!  But I think I could write today\'s one because my opinion comes to my mind when I see the topic.>> But I think I could write about today\'s one because my opinion comes to my mind upon seeing the topic.I don\'t think temporary or imperfect solutions to problems only create more serious problems. >>I don\'t think temporary or imperfect solutions only create more serious problems.  It is true that it may not solve the problem completely. >>It is also true that it may not solve the problem completely.  But I think it still could help. >>CORRECT!  It\'s like a diet. >>CORRECT! (These days(No,always) I really should do diet but I don\'t. >>(These days, I mean, always) I really should go on a diet but I don\'t. So I come up with a diet as similarity. Hahaha T^T) >>So I come up with a diet as a similarity. Hahaha T^T) We always lose 1-2kg time to time to accomplish our final goal which is to lose more than 10kg. >>CORRECT! Losing some pounds time to time helps to be what I want to be.] >>Losing some pounds time to time helps in order to achieve what I want.  Reducing 1-2kg isn\'t my final goal but it still helps me to get healthier and prettier.>>CORRECT! Do you also think that my opinion makes sense? >>CORRECT! (Of course, I do!^^) I hope you so. Haha :)>> I hope you do. Haha :)Have a great great great day, Rose :) !!! >>CORRECT! (Thanks for emphasizing this GREAT anyway^^)

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