Long time no writing ! Sorry :) hahaha
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I have to say again that your daily topics are so philosophical that sometimes I don't know how to write. Hahaha :) !!! But I think I could write today's one because my opinion comes to my mind when I see the topic.
I don't think temporary or imperfect solutions to problems only create more serious problems. It is true that it may not solve the problem completely. But I think it still could help. It's like a diet.(These days(No,always) I really should do diet but I don't. So I come up with a diet as similarity. Hahaha T^T)
We always lose 1-2kg time to time to accomplish our final goal which is to lose more than 10kg. Losing some pounds time to time helps to be what I want to be. Reducing 1-2kg isn't my final goal but it still helps me to get healthier and prettier.
Do you also think that my opinion makes sense? I hope you so. Haha :)
Have a great great great day, Rose :) !!!
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Whoa! I miss seeing your masterpiece, [이름]^^
Please enjoy camping with your family^^
I think you are just relishing your not-so-busy schedule nowadays so go ahead!
Have a great Friday and thanks for making me smile every day!
I have to say again that your daily topics are so philosophical that sometimes I don\'t know how to write. Hahaha :) !!!
>>CORRECT!
But I think I could write today\'s one because my opinion comes to my mind when I see the topic.>> But I think I could write about today\'s one because my opinion comes to my mind upon seeing the topic.I don\'t think temporary or imperfect solutions to problems only create more serious problems.
>>I don\'t think temporary or imperfect solutions only create more serious problems.
It is true that it may not solve the problem completely.
>>It is also true that it may not solve the problem completely.
But I think it still could help.
>>CORRECT!
It\'s like a diet.
>>CORRECT!
(These days(No,always) I really should do diet but I don\'t.
>>(These days, I mean, always) I really should go on a diet but I don\'t.
So I come up with a diet as similarity. Hahaha T^T)
>>So I come up with a diet as a similarity. Hahaha T^T)
We always lose 1-2kg time to time to accomplish our final goal which is to lose more than 10kg.
>>CORRECT!
Losing some pounds time to time helps to be what I want to be.]
>>Losing some pounds time to time helps in order to achieve what I want.
Reducing 1-2kg isn\'t my final goal but it still helps me to get healthier and prettier.>>CORRECT!
Do you also think that my opinion makes sense?
>>CORRECT! (Of course, I do!^^) I hope you so. Haha :)>> I hope you do. Haha :)Have a great great great day, Rose :) !!!
>>CORRECT! (Thanks for emphasizing this GREAT anyway^^)
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