long trip
학생이 쓴 원문
We came to thought the other area.
We saw lee son sin and end area and we rided monorail.
We went Bamboo thema park
We went Dinosaur Museum
We went Jeonju Hanok Village
강사 첨삭
Good morning Ms. [Name]!
Thanks for sharing to me about your long trip.
Wow! You went to a lot of places.
Anyway, I corrected your sentences but I\'m not quite sure if I understood them all correctly.
Please go over it.
Have a great day!
See you tomorrow!
~T. Jessie~
We came to thought the other area.
>> We went to another area.We saw lee son sin and end area and we rided monorail.
>> Do you mean: We saw Lee Son Sin and we rode a monorail.We went Bamboo thema park
>> We went to a bamboo theme park.We went Dinosaur Museum
>> We went to a Dinosaur Museum.We went Jeonju Hanok Village
>> We went to Jeonju Hanok Village.
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