longer recess/ break time? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
I actually agree about the longer recess/ break time.
First, we can be closer with the schoolmates.
Because we have a lot of time to share with our friends, we can be closer with our friends.
Second, we can relax during the class time.
Because we have a lot of time to relax our minds, we can be relaxed during the class time.
Because of those advantages, I agree with the longer recess/ break time.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
You nailed this one. Keep it up and see you next week! ^^
~~Teacher Kate
>>CORRECT!
First, we can be closer with the schoolmates.
First, we can be closer with the schoolmates.
>>First, we can be closer with our schoolmates.
Because we have a lot of time to share with our friends, we can be closer with our friends.
Because we have a lot of time to share with our friends, we can be closer with our friends.
>>CORRECT!
Second, we can relax during the class time.
Second, we can relax during the class time.
>>CORRECT!
Because we have a lot of time to relax our minds, we can be relaxed during the class time.
Because we have a lot of time to relax our minds, we can be relaxed during the class time.
>>CORRECT!
Because of those advantages, I agree with the longer recess/ break time.
Because of those advantages, I agree with the longer recess/ break time.
>>CORRECT!
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