Longer school calendar.

Hello there, Ben!^.^

I appreciate that you are eager to study more and very diligent in doing your homework.

Anyhow, some of the sentences are a bit confusing.

I tried my best to check to the point that I got the main thought of your sentences.

But if I didn\'t get the thought, please explain it further in class.

Hope to see you soon, Ben!^.^

~~Teacher Erine~~

In my opinion, Education is the efficient method to get out of poverty and approach to how do we think of the reasonable way.

>>In  my opinion, education is the most efficient method to get out of poverty and an approach on how we think of the reasonable ways to live.

Happiness isn\'t depend on how much money do we have.

>>Happiness doesn\'t depend on how much money we have.

but If you don\'t have enough money to buy basic stuff such as house, cloth or food,

These could make you feel depressed or make \'backlash\' against your parents or a government. 

>>But if you don\'t have enough money to buy the basic stuff such as house, clothes, food, 

these could make you feel depressed or backlash against your parents or to the government.
 In the past, Developing country had a high happiness index which was investigated throughout all over the world,

but It has been changed these days due to largely development of internet.

>>In the past, developing countries had a high happiness index which was investigated all over the world

but it has changed these days due to the large development of the Internet.

They are able to compare to each other who live the other side of the Earth.

>>They are able to compare the people here and the creatures who live outside Earth.
We must have standard that what make us happy.

>>We must have the standards of what makes us happy.

For this, Longer school calendar is essential.

>>For this, longer school calendar is essential.

Of course, Adverse effect could be expected like increasing private education market or unemployment problem of well-educated.

>>Of course, adverse effects could be expected like increasing private education market or unemployment problem of well-educated people.

This being so, we need to foster system of public education.

>>This being so, we need to foster a system for public education.
 I\'m sure that longer school calendar is such a good idea.

>>Correct.