Looking for advice online
학생이 쓴 원문
When I encounter some new words or unfamiliar phrases, I always look them up online. I usually use Naver search engine.And when I have some issues about my health, I usually search for some symptoms and treatments online. Sometimes I send a text asking my condition to know whether I develop some diseases or disorders or not. Recently I looked for advice regarding intermittent fasting online. Since then, I have practiced it every day.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Gi [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework. Nowadays, we can simply search online for things we want to know, and information is very accessible. I think people must be aware and able to discern which information to accept and which are fake and can cause harm.
- T. Caitlyn
When I encounter some new words or unfamiliar phrases, I always look them up online.
>> CORRECT
I usually use Naver search engine.
>> CORRECT
And when I have some issues about my health, I usually search for some symptoms and treatments online.
>> CORRECT
Sometimes I send a text asking my condition to know whether I develop some diseases or disorders or not.
>> Sometimes I send a text asking about my condition to know whether I have developed some diseases or disorders or not.
Recently I looked for advice regarding intermittent fasting online.
>> CORRECT
Since then, I have practiced it every day.
>> CORRECT
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