looking where he was sitting.
학생이 쓴 원문
When I was in the hospital, I decided to do something everyday for my health so I would never come back to the hospital.
Sure enough, two months after I was discharged, these days I’ve been taking a walk early in the morning everyday.
A park where I usually go for a walk is not busy at the time.
Yesterday,I was enjoying myself listening to my favorite music during a stroll, when I saw a cat staring at me.
He was too cute to be just passed by and it felt as if his eyes said to me that he let me go get him something to eat.
I didn’t have any words to refuse and then, went to find anything to eat for him right off the bat.
The next thing I knew, however, he was gone.
I didn’t have any clue where he’s gone and the thing that I had was only a can of tuna.
강사 첨삭
Hello KC
Once again, thank you for your homework.
I really had a great time with you today. Your essay has full of life. You gave a lot of insights:)
I can see that you really like to learn.
Please check the corrections, I\'ve made.
T. Jeny
When I was in the hospital, I decided to do something everyday for my health so I would never come back to the hospital.
>>When I was in the hospital, I decided to do something for my health every day so that I would never come back to the hospital.Sure enough, two months after I was discharged, these days I’ve been taking a walk early in the morning everyday.
>>Sure enough, two months after I was discharged, I’ve been taking a walk early in the morning every day.
A park where I usually go for a walk is not busy at the time.
>>There is a park where I usually go for a walk and it\'s not that busy at that time.
Yesterday,I was enjoying myself listening to my favorite music during a stroll, when I saw a cat staring at me.
>>Yesterday, I was enjoying myself listening to my favorite music during a stroll when I saw a cat staring at me.
He was too cute to be just passed by and it felt as if his eyes said to me that he let me go get him something to eat.
>>He was too cute just to be on the streets so staring at him I felt that he was telling me to get him something to eat.
I didn’t have any words to refuse and then, went to find anything to eat for him right off the bat.
>>I couldn\'t refuse so I went to find him anything to eat right off the bat.
The next thing I knew, however, he was gone.
>>correct
I didn’t have any clue where he’s gone and the thing that I had was only a can of tuna.
>>I didn\'t have any clue where he went and the thing was I only had a can of tuna.
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